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sweet

respect, favorites.

Dude awsome piece.

Respect. Ha ha its the dopeness.

love this peice

But its unoriginal. And though I somewhat agree with you I'm sorry OysterHippopotamus this is one of beethovens most basic peices, its elementary dude seriously its easy I played this when I was in first grade. still doesn't change the fact its a brilliant chord progression. and you played it well. still Its not that impressive to me, maybe if you pull off the third movement or compose a piece of this quality. sorry dude but I know many people who can play this with there eyes closed on piano and guitar including myself. and not a fan of the guitar echo it sounds noisy to my ears, though cool voices they're definately dope.

I think its legit

sweetness right around 1:30 and on. that was a bad ass rest.

awsome mix but....

Like right when it hit 00:55 you nailed it, it was the dopeness. Other than that, some of the harmonies you used just killed it for me, Like those horrible chords you use again at 01:10. Ahh cant you see, it hurts the ears!!!!!!!! Your definately on to something though.

goneloco92 responds:

ah ok, ty for the comment :)

Damn really robot-lock?

I personally think the drums are legit as fuck. Its super simple melodically but very nice and calming. The swells give a nice effect. 5/5

Hahahahahhhahahaaaha. . . duude bro,

You are a very unique indevidual, which is not a bad thing by any means, actually its very interesting.You look at the world in a different way. After listening to space symphony(Which by all means sucked) But was so different, something compelled me to listen to you're other works. After every one I was in complete awe, at music, sounds and structure so improbably different than anything ever heard or that I've ever heard, but yet you conceived. A lot of them really kinda suck, but in such a unique way it makes it irresistably interesting to hear. So keep it up. This was some funny shit, I was completely entertained by this opera.

Ha ha ha great

This afro sure has soul brotha. Just had the shittiest day, literally just got back from bailing my girl out of jail. But now that I feel privliged you were able to record and share this with newgrounds or even lucky to have even stumbled accross such audible gold in the first place, I'm in a pretty happy mood now. Good vibes are resonating from this pieces core.

To the reviewer under me,
I can see where you're coming from but personally I think it sounds better with the guitar rythm, and I say props on the drums they do a pretty good job in accenting the funk. Hmm though some bass would be the dopeness completion, It does the job the way it is.

thecoreman responds:

Wow man, thanks a lot. Really appreciate and happpy to change your mood, it's all I can ask for :D

When I'll have the time, I'll probably add a bass track... Busy now, though.

Thanks a million!

idea

I like your style, its unique and entertaining to listen to such chaos in you're music.

Well the drums are cool but come in random. But they end nice with "starting off with a new canvase" just come in a little early, put them imediatly after "puts you in a forbitable state of mind" then drums. and possibly a cool way to end it "so you can see life from where you are from that perspective" sinking noise with building vibes. . . much like thx sound masering. complete rest. . . to a wonderous harmony representing light with the the heart beat to a building noise to more chaotic drum and possibly continuation or end. or instead for calmness right after the heart beat instead more soft melody to birds and end

the classic three decending wholes and one half

turn around with e major.... An overused proggression used a lot in spanish guitar, and my favorite green sleeves. not so original but a good piece. keep it up.

Gavin Hammond is an audio engineer, piano teacher, composer and music instructor.

Gavin Hammond @CheckMark

Age 36, Male

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Los Angeles Film School

Albuquerque, NM

Joined on 4/23/05

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